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20...的翻译比较舒服,几处修改建议如下,共同探讨:)
欢迎您通过此域名进入本站 Welcome to this domains page
这既证明了您卓越的眼光 Your visit reflects your business sense
也证明了这个域名的价值 As well as value of the domain
更是一种难得的机缘 Your business sense brings you to this wonderful domain name
So you come here by no accident
如果说网站是通向世界的门 If a website is viewed (as )door to the Internet world
那么域名就是网站的脸 then a domain is simply face of the website
如果把互联网比作房地产 If we regard Internet as real estate
那么域名就是口岸和地段 Then a domain is a port and ( and 改成or)location
Which is certainly of high value
好域名是一种稀缺资源 Good domains are resource of rarity
不仅能带来人气和流量 They brings to you more visitors and traffic
更能带来商机和财源 And consequently more business opportunities and revenue/ Not only brings you more visitors and traffics ,but also businesss opportunities and treasure
而现在,机会就摆在您的面前! Now, you are presented with such a precious business chance!
[ 本帖最后由 rosa1616 于 2008-6-11 22:18 编辑 ] |
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